Please login or register. June 24, 2017, 04:37:59 PM

Author Topic: write a poem for a user :)  (Read 7261 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #45 on: January 08, 2010, 06:44:10 PM »
What do you want 6 billions for?



it rhymes inside my head, so fuck off bumb.l.foot !
« Last Edit: January 09, 2010, 01:52:44 AM by andy_rose86 »

Worchild

  • NewGNR Crew!
  • Very Old At Heart
  • *****
  • Posts: 33333
  • Gender: Male
  • *I AM INCONQUERABLE*
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #46 on: January 08, 2010, 06:52:21 PM »
that doesnt rhyme :smirk:
W.

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #47 on: January 08, 2010, 06:53:10 PM »
that doesnt rhyme :smirk:

it rhymes when i sing it  :tongue:

Worchild

  • NewGNR Crew!
  • Very Old At Heart
  • *****
  • Posts: 33333
  • Gender: Male
  • *I AM INCONQUERABLE*
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #48 on: January 08, 2010, 06:54:18 PM »
audio/video or it doesnt :evil:
W.

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #49 on: January 08, 2010, 06:56:35 PM »
audio/video or it doesnt :evil:

ohhhh come on it rhymes a lotttt! look

instead of pronouncing bitch, i pronounce biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit ch (as if it were beach) so it rhymes with three



Worchild

  • NewGNR Crew!
  • Very Old At Heart
  • *****
  • Posts: 33333
  • Gender: Male
  • *I AM INCONQUERABLE*
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #50 on: January 08, 2010, 07:03:40 PM »
 :argh :argh :argh

i wont argue, you have a different comprehension of the word rhyme haha
W.

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #51 on: January 08, 2010, 07:07:11 PM »
:argh :argh :argh

i wont argue, you have a different comprehension of the word rhyme haha

 :mwa

Worchild

  • NewGNR Crew!
  • Very Old At Heart
  • *****
  • Posts: 33333
  • Gender: Male
  • *I AM INCONQUERABLE*
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #52 on: January 08, 2010, 07:09:08 PM »
dont kiss heterosexually, you are a proud lesbian you told me
W.

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #53 on: January 08, 2010, 07:13:20 PM »
dont kiss heterosexually, you are a proud lesbian you told me

but i kiss you as a sister kisses her brother  :(

Worchild

  • NewGNR Crew!
  • Very Old At Heart
  • *****
  • Posts: 33333
  • Gender: Male
  • *I AM INCONQUERABLE*
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #54 on: January 08, 2010, 07:27:40 PM »
ok then, i hope its a hillbilly brother and sister :unibrow:
W.

Modzilla

  • It Was A Long Time With Me
  • ****
  • Posts: 3479
  • ROAR!!!!
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #55 on: January 30, 2010, 01:34:25 AM »
Pour Andy :mwa.

For better or worse, you've inspired me.
« Last Edit: February 18, 2010, 11:45:04 PM by Modzilla »
"Forgive them that fuck up my show, and bless them that they might grow old"

In full support of Guns N' Roses, come hell or high water. ~ La Familia =)

The Man...The Myth... the Murph!!!

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #56 on: January 30, 2010, 02:28:40 AM »
Pour Andy :mwa.

Searing pain, feathers breaking skin.
Perfect subordination.
Burning lungs, flight is for the sheep.
A will?  has it not been broken?
Acceptance of fated events,
Is acceptance of walking dead.

For better or worse, you've inspired me.

i like it

Modzilla

  • It Was A Long Time With Me
  • ****
  • Posts: 3479
  • ROAR!!!!
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #57 on: January 30, 2010, 03:04:09 AM »
i like it

I'm glad =).  It's pretty straight-forward, more so than most of the things I write, I don't like to spell things out for people.  And I guess I'm saying as much about me through the words as I am about you.  Probably more.
"Forgive them that fuck up my show, and bless them that they might grow old"

In full support of Guns N' Roses, come hell or high water. ~ La Familia =)

The Man...The Myth... the Murph!!!

Stifler's Mom

  • Very Old At Heart
  • ******
  • Posts: 17240
  • Gender: Female
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #58 on: January 30, 2010, 03:17:59 AM »
this part is good:

Acceptance of fated events,
Is acceptance of walking dead.

 :)

and burning lungs makes me think of when Icarus was flying so so high that he almost touches the sun, but i must be careful or my wax wings will melt just like his  :shy:
« Last Edit: January 30, 2010, 03:33:43 AM by andy_rose86 »

Modzilla

  • It Was A Long Time With Me
  • ****
  • Posts: 3479
  • ROAR!!!!
Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #59 on: January 30, 2010, 04:10:29 AM »
this part is good:

 :)

and burning lungs makes me think of when Icarus was flying so so high that he almost touches the sun, but i must be careful or my wax wings will melt just like his  :shy:

Thank you.

I knew you'd get most of it, if not all.  There are a few references in there, and that is one of them. 

Though you've interpreted it differently than I would, but that is the beauty of literature.  Everyone views it their own way. 

I think it's only a matter of time.  Icarus never wants his wings to melt, but they always will.  He can't stop himself from flying so high, he was even warned =).
« Last Edit: February 18, 2010, 11:44:32 PM by Modzilla »
"Forgive them that fuck up my show, and bless them that they might grow old"

In full support of Guns N' Roses, come hell or high water. ~ La Familia =)

The Man...The Myth... the Murph!!!