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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #15 on: November 26, 2009, 08:45:54 PM »
Well my Michelle...They certainlt do find their way to my heart.  :mwa

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #16 on: November 26, 2009, 08:49:21 PM »
look again and read the poem son
im not gay, so just play with your gun ;)
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2009, 12:59:32 AM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Fuck you, whore.

Johan is not nuts. At least not anymore nuts than the rest of us. He is ruled by his own psychology, which includes jealousy that he cannot sing that high.

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #18 on: November 27, 2009, 02:38:43 AM »
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Those are facts
so fuck you  :finger:
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #19 on: December 30, 2009, 05:40:51 AM »
for the french who like french toast...

Quand je lève dans le matin,
Je réchauffe un peut de pain,
FRENCH TOAST!!
.......... poutine .......... I'M AWESOME .......... poutine .......... 

--FUCK the U.F.I!--

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #20 on: December 30, 2009, 10:26:20 AM »
This Life’s Greatest Melancholy.

 
Someone once asked me, “Have you been so much into it”?

Have you ever felt it?

                 I said yes, smiling bitterly to this kid!                 

Thinking about the inexplicable nature of love that keeps our spirits high.

 
But just on the spur of a moment, I guess…

when I can be real to someone

who won’t laugh at my insanity.

It’s such a great melancholy to see a kid watching you cry..

then laughed at how impossible you are!

 

Yes!  I said “I am impossible”.

But who knows? 

Someone so great in my life said:  “Nothing is impossible when you know very well

how to keep on trying!

For who knows and who can tell?


The kid laughed again.

In helplessness, I said “I want to cry” on this great melancholy

that someone sane could feel.

Yes, I just felt it now!

and it makes me live more.

 

But why do I need to hide my face before I could spell it out to a kid.

Something this great is  life’s mystery or misery perhaps.

I wanted it so much to pass me by, without knowing the answer

so as not to feel the pain much more.

 

How could I escape this illusion?

When I chose to feel so much love

With someone so high

That I couldn’t reach him anymore.



Who am I?

Where am I?

Why do these questions matter a lot now?

I feel like a trash.

Someone no good.

A very small being

Very ordinary

Incapable

 



And I see him so high

So superficial

So impossible

 

Now, I know pretty well the line that sets apart two different worlds.

Like  Earth and Pluto.

Whem there’s so much  life on earth

There’s nothing much in Pluto

It’s going going gone.

They say love till it hurts.

I said “Yes, it would have to be a lot”.

When you need to move mountains

Or fly your way to the top

Hoping not to fall

in reality.



You want so much to get your way out

No matter how crashed you are

For when you hope for the most impossible thing

You forget that you need to get real

Pushing through something so great

That you yourself alone

Are the only one left believing.

 

It’s hard to make miracles

When the whole world mocks you with insanity

And of great impossibility

 

I must say

You’ll never really know how it would seem

When you won’t be the person

You wish to become


And to the greatest melancholy ever known to me

This is making miracles!

Otherwise shaking it off

And forever say:


“Once I’ve become someone who wanted to be so great, high  and impossible

Just to be known by the most deserving guy to ever lay my eyes on

And feel love and melancholy

Sympathy and helplessness,

And I

FAILED!!!

 

 

Thi s is a poem I made out of fondeness for Axl Rose.  I'm just a fan.  I don't mean fondness romantically.  I have a lot of respect and adoration for him.  (haha defensive)
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #21 on: December 30, 2009, 12:53:08 PM »
i once sucked a guy
sheesh i was high :smoking:

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #22 on: January 02, 2010, 01:55:14 AM »
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
If skunks had a college,
They'd call it P.U.
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #23 on: January 02, 2010, 01:56:06 AM »
There once was a monk from Siberia
Who's morals were rather inferior.
He did to a nun
What he shouldn't have done
And now she's a mother superior.
"Don't put the bodies in the wishing well ..." - Janie Lane (RIP)

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #24 on: January 02, 2010, 01:58:17 AM »
Be he ever so humble
There is none like Bumble.

It should be known
Near and far.
He achieved greatness
With his swiss cheese guitar.
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #25 on: January 02, 2010, 01:59:30 AM »
A haiku inspired by "southpark."

Eloquent
To the point
"Suck my balls."

I know the meter is off. So, sue me.
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #26 on: January 02, 2010, 02:53:45 PM »
Be he ever so humble
There is none like Bumble.

It should be known
Near and far.
He achieved greatness
With his swiss cheese guitar.


 :shy:  im honoured
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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #27 on: January 05, 2010, 04:33:35 PM »
Awesome :D
I'll write one to a special person...

So young and yet so hateful
you call the shots yet your untamed
you hurt the ones around you with your words
and yet there's no one here to blame

Your beauty won't last long
if you hurt yourself inside
inside you'll burn, you'll hate yourself
you'll someday wish you'd die

Your a prisoner of your mind
you have the key but it won't fit
Inside your mind you have more fits
until you love yourself
you'll leave this hell
and join the rest in inner peace



« Last Edit: January 05, 2010, 04:35:10 PM by mitophin22 »
I almost gave a F#*k

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #28 on: January 05, 2010, 04:39:34 PM »
your names andy just like mine
but your tits are bigger unlike mine
despite these facts and common crime
id take a blowjob anytime
cause after all...youre my dickmatewall

key guys these just came to my head but ive been crackin up myself  :lol:

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Re: write a poem for a user :)
« Reply #29 on: January 05, 2010, 05:21:50 PM »
your names andy just like mine
but your tits are bigger unlike mine
despite these facts and common crime
id take a blowjob anytime
cause after all...youre my dickmatewall

key guys these just came to my head but ive been crackin up myself  :lol:

 :lol: :lol:  i loved this one