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DanGnR

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Another new song i wrote today
« on: October 05, 2009, 11:06:55 PM »
This ones called ROCK N ROLL IS THE PLACE TO BE.


I see you listening to dance and shit
and i think
girl
what are you listening to?
you need to know that this isnt the place to be
the place to be is .....

(chorus starts)

ROCK N ROLL
yeah, rock n roll is the place to be
where you rock all night and party everyday
there is no rules when it comes to rock n roll
you can
fuck all night
party all night
get drunk all night
just DO WHAT THE FUCK YOU WANT!!!!!!!

(chorus ends)

(GUITAR SOLO)

Now girl i hope you listened
get out of dance and shit
and join us on
the rock n roll train
cause

rock n roll is the place to be
i said
rock n roll is the place to be

(back to chorus)




Yeah rock n roll is the place to be yeah yeah yeah yeahhhhhhhh

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Re: Another new song i wrote today
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2009, 03:16:58 PM »
Its a pretty good tune bro.
Good luck with it.  :D
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Re: Another new song i wrote today
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2009, 11:24:43 PM »
nice. Chorus is kinda KISS-like. My suggestion is to make it a little longer. add a tiny bit more to it and it'll be bitchin' :nod:


overall... :thumbsup:
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Re: Another new song i wrote today
« Reply #3 on: October 12, 2009, 12:52:10 AM »
Very nice tune bro  :rockon:
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Re: Another new song i wrote today
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2009, 03:38:49 PM »
I dont know why, but I just laughed my ass off when I read this part:

"you can
fuck all night
party all night
get drunk all night
just DO WHAT THE FUCK YOU WANT!!!!!!!"

I like the flow of the song, but I think you can make it better by making it more "Mature," perhaps use better words or terminology. And ya I would agree with Dr.J on extending the song little bit.
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