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A song I wrote - Puppet
« on: October 20, 2009, 11:38:26 PM »
Puppet

Come Child, Come closer to me,
Don’t you worry now; I have come to save you
I will protect you from the evil ones
in a world so cold
I will liberate you from pain and misery 
Let me help you find the way

Pull the trigger and unleash his will
Pull the trigger and fall into the arms of heaven
Pull the trigger my son and be free
Offer your sacrifice to him

Pay no attention to them because
I speak the words of heaven
Pay no attention to them because
they don’t give a fuck about you like I do

Pull the trigger and unleash his will
Pull the trigger and fall into the arms of heaven
don’t need to think it over because what I am
telling you is the truth
Take your revenge and
Sacrifice yourself,
Pull the trigger my son... 

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Re: A song I wrote - Puppet
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2009, 12:04:05 AM »
Very Metallica like. I like it great tune dude.  :rockon:
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Re: A song I wrote - Puppet
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2009, 12:09:00 AM »
Thanks! It is supposed to be about how a young boy gets recruited to become a terrorist. I hope I make that point clear in the song.

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Re: A song I wrote - Puppet
« Reply #3 on: October 21, 2009, 07:17:04 PM »
Very Interesting.
Good job :)
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Re: A song I wrote - Puppet
« Reply #4 on: October 22, 2009, 01:24:17 AM »
Very Interesting.
Good job :)

thanks, its a concept song. I am writing a concept album and so this one of the pieces I wrote.

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Re: A song I wrote - Puppet
« Reply #5 on: October 22, 2009, 01:18:26 PM »
very awesome, sorta like a disturbed song...
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