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shadowsoul

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« on: March 27, 2009, 02:16:22 PM »
...still fading
« Last Edit: March 28, 2009, 05:05:17 AM by shadowsoul »
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"Understanding and Acceptance are useless alone; triumphant together."

quote-shadowsoul, March 08th, 2011

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Re: Masks and Melancholy
« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2009, 05:18:45 PM »
Nice...very nice :nod:

I really liked this bit:

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... i so wish this mask could reach and cover my mind,
to leave all this pain and stalling meloncolly far behind...
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Re: Masks and Melancholy
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2009, 04:29:54 AM »
yeah i changed the last two lines, i much like it better that way. thanks man! i have another one, probably the last one ill post for a while. but check it out as well (Dying Passion Sanctuary).

Has everyone forgotten about this old one i posted:


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shadowsoul
december 4th

buzzing in throughout the air,
tiny electric waves...directions of sight.
taking it all in and swelling to the brink,
everyone remembers everything,
so locked down tight.

freedom is a paradox,
it is enigma.
it is blind ambition,
nothing short of impossible.

greater, in todays world, is the focus,
than the image.
miscredit and overated,
this realm is of birth and death.

a thousand elaphants to hundreds of galons,
despiration well winning triumphantly over inspiration and passion.
damnation of a generation,
collapse of identity.
kamilians maybe be the capitalists...

...but its those elaphants that give birth.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2009, 05:20:06 PM by shadowsoul »
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Re: *DELETE*
« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2009, 05:01:04 PM »
 :O I missed that one. You posted it during my hiatus :shy:

Loving it though. Have you ever thought about trying to get some of them published? They're really cool. And since I've started a tradition of quoting my favourite bit from your poems, I'll quote my favourite from this one too :D

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freedom is a paradox,
it is enigma.
it is blind ambition,
nothing short of impossible.

That's actually my favourite bit of poetry from you so far Shadowsoul. I think I'm going to write it out and put it on my wall...I really dig that  :bow: and I'm not bullshitting; that really is cool!
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