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slashof

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WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS SONG?
« Reply #15 on: November 06, 2006, 03:00:29 PM »
Quote from: "Locomotive16"
i dont care not really an issue so mind ur business


how about being banned?

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« Reply #16 on: November 06, 2006, 03:03:29 PM »
never got banned so i ainr doin sumthing wrong so piss off

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« Reply #17 on: November 06, 2006, 03:06:26 PM »
moved  :\

why did people even respond to this?

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« Reply #18 on: November 06, 2006, 03:08:59 PM »
ok computer freak go fuck ur self k?
atleast im not a a guy speding his life on the pc..
and probably a better muscian thN UY BY MILES

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« Reply #19 on: November 06, 2006, 03:11:27 PM »
the net can be harsh sometimes huni  :(

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« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2006, 06:17:47 PM »
Quote from: "Locomotive16"
Come in come right in
dont hesitate come right in
im the one with your wildest dreams
im the one who can set you free

Hello city speaking
i wont rip you off
come right in

All ill do is play you n toy with you you
until your paranoid bipolar n crazy
Come to me a person come out a
paranoid andorid Aw!,

ill take you through a world youve never ben
ill break you into peace until your but a sin
ill help you admit nobody dies a virgin because life screws all and your first in line honey yea!

Breakdown your on your knees
your sinking in my seas

Aw..!


kinda like GNR, VR, Black Sabbath, and Douglas Adams put into a mixer, shaken up well, and served cold.  

Not bad, if it has cool riffs to go with it

You should make your tag line something to the effect of "Kov's realism, shattering idealism everywhere."

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« Reply #21 on: December 27, 2006, 08:02:48 PM »
Pretty good song dude
although u shopuld extend it
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w.a.r.'swife

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« Reply #22 on: December 28, 2006, 01:26:24 AM »
Quote from: "Locomotive16"


ill help you admit nobody dies a virgin because life screws all and your first in line honey yea!

Breakdown your on your knees
your sinking in my seas

Aw..!


those are good lines but the rest is a rough draft

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« Reply #23 on: February 07, 2007, 01:41:04 PM »
       Keep writing and don't care much about what others might
think.With all the respect for everyone,it is so easy for some people
to say:"oh this is not good or you could change this or that..." but
why don't they start creating something? Sometimes,even brilliant
minds have some loss of inspiration.So keep being yourself and expressing
your ideas by writing.Much respect,peace.
I will always "fly" no matter what...

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Re: WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS SONG?
« Reply #24 on: February 07, 2007, 09:36:49 PM »
well its great that you are trying but my first impression?
It was painful to read...didn't flow, the first half was better than the second half for sure though..Reads like a shitty ripoff of "Welcome to the jungle"......just being honest..lol..