Author Topic: My song Im workin on (Read 765 times)

Cotie · « **on:** March 04, 2006, 09:52:32 PM »

Two Faced Bitch

I dove deep
Deep into something that shouldn't of been
She hurt me deep
Deep within

It goes to show the ways
the ways of a multi faced bitch
she was an angel at first
but it all went off like a switch

So now I have to find myself
Go and buy a solution
Now I need to get time for myself
an finally change this evolution

I can feel that Im changin
my minds rearrangin
Now everythings spinning
and no one is winning

I need to find myself
get deep inside myself
My eyes are bleeding
From all the reading

I put up with her cheating
all that was heart beating
and now its over
when we had just gotin closer

in the background(WHYYYYY...)

Cotie · « **Reply #1 on:** March 04, 2006, 10:03:14 PM »

tell me what you guys think of it

chineseroses · « **Reply #2 on:** March 04, 2006, 10:05:05 PM »

very, very good, much better than anything i could write.

Cotie · « **Reply #3 on:** March 05, 2006, 02:06:40 PM »

thanks Im gunna probably post the real full song i just finish recently.

Rock Diva · « **Reply #4 on:** March 05, 2006, 07:39:50 PM »

I'm not feeling the hate that much.

Cotie · « **Reply #5 on:** March 05, 2006, 10:02:47 PM »

hey just tell me what i should do to make it better i would appreciate that